Last summer , my parents and I went to Beijing , I was very happy .
Beijing is the capital of China . There are many places of interest , many people come to visit Beijing every year .
I climbed the Great Wall . It’s very famous . It looks like huge flying dragon . It’s said that it’s the only man-made wonder on the earth we can from the moon . It has a long history about 2,000 years . I have taken many photos of it.
I visited the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum , too . They are all very wonderful . I had a wonderful time .
I think Beijing is one of the most beautiful and famous cities in the world .
I want to visit Beijing again .Welcome to Beijing .
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